Sunday, 26 February 2012
blog 3: superstition and belief
It used to be a peaceful and beautiful town. One day, everything changed. The small town was filled by a thick fog in which there were many kinds of blood-drinking monsters. Some people who were shopping at that time were stranded in a supermarket. As time went by, a kind of fear spread from one person to another. A woman who believed in the God started to impart the others that it was the God that came to punish human beings because people had done a quantity of crime to the nature. The God was going to make human buy what they had owed him. The woman also stressed that no one should be against this and that everyone was asked to be waiting for death. At first, only few people believed in the woman. But subsequently at that night, some monsters attracted by the light bumped into the room and killed several people. Most of the people were freaked out and some of them changed to be apt to accept the woman’s words. A superstition was given birth since then. A person is apt to become dizzy when he faces a huge fear. The superstition seems like a distraction which can bring relief to fresh lives. Nevertheless, we also are trying our best to become a brilliant person and be respected by others. What if we found ourselves stupid at one time? We are surely to feel shameful and spare no effort to sweep out the blots, which we could avoid at the beginning. What can we do when we are in fear? Just go to bed and enjoy your slumber. It is a more efficient way to get rid of the fear and we can also skip the superstition then.
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The story is interesting, but what is the ending?
ReplyDeleteYour topic is special: just go to bed if you are in fear and you will forget everything. However, I think there is still nightmare that can trouble you...
Actually, I can not even understand what I mean. When I reviewed my blog I thought it sucked. Now I will not change my opinion-this blog is not worth reading!
DeleteWell, it is a quite interesting story. However, actually I don't really understand the latter half of the blog. Do you mean that it is shameful to think that we once had fear? Do you think that it is stupid to fear something? If yes, then I don't think so. Everyone should be afraid of something and it is quite natural. One must have a metal heart if he is not. I also don't think that superstition always brings us negative effects. Some of them can discipline people's behavior and help form the traditional ritual and etiquette.
ReplyDeleteI think I have failed to express myself. I can not clearly tell a story. I need to review and edit it again. what I want to show you is not as what you have in your mind. When I have rewrited it, I will do better.
DeleteSorry,I failed to understand your story.Maybe you can tell me the chinese one and then I can comment your blog.
ReplyDeleteI will write it again and again until you canunderstand me. Wait for me, please.
DeleteThe story jumps & is not clear from here:
ReplyDeleteGod was going to make human buy what they had owed him. The woman also stressed that no one should be against this and that everyone was asked to be waiting for death. - from buy to death?
believed in the God started to impart the others - article and prep mistakes here.
relief to fresh lives - (collocation) - relief to renewed? lives